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Blending in by ~sjon:iconsjon:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional


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Wasting time
spilling yer life
Love's run dry
joy long lost.

You feel your life
slipping away.
Your very self blending
in the background.

Deserted by friends
that used to stand by.
Betrayed by people
that used to be nice.

Still surrounded
yet feeling invisible
cause nobody notices
you lose yer grip.

Untill you realise
passive waiting won't work
Only screaming will make
them notice.

But you're tired of
screaming and kicking.
You long for comfort
in a world that lost it.
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©2003-2008 ~sjon
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Inspired by Draconanaki, again. ( [link]> ) I know it's an old picture but it still grips me and shakes my heart.

It doesn't rhyme like most of my poems but I don't think it has to.
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~pockycollision:iconpockycollision: Sep 21, 2003, 12:42:55 PM
wow sjon...thats very beautiful, i actually feel like that alot....:heart: *gives you tummy rubs*

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~sjon:iconsjon: Sep 21, 2003, 1:18:10 PM
Thanks
*scratches ear*

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*draconanaki:icondraconanaki: Sep 24, 2003, 12:13:47 AM
Wow... for that piece to inspire that... maybe my pics have hidden meanings now... that not even I see... but this poem is so well written... heh... sorry to inspire you again... hee hee hee.
~sjon:iconsjon: Sep 27, 2003, 12:00:01 AM
Your pics have meaning because I associate them with feelings I have and had. I think our minds work much on the same wavelenght.

Don't feel sorry ... just keep doing it ... ^__^

*waves, sounters away whistling*

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~paper-stars:iconpaper-stars: Aug 22, 2004, 11:17:16 PM
Gah. You made me cry. Nice work. *sniff*

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~sjon:iconsjon: Sep 9, 2004, 2:02:11 PM
Thanks.
I hope to get more poems up but I am lacking in inspiration and time to write new ones. Maybe when Autumn kicks in I can get back in the mood.

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~paper-stars:iconpaper-stars: Sep 9, 2004, 8:08:13 PM
Best of luck. ^^ It's always hard to get around that writer's block...

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~White-Ryuu:iconWhite-Ryuu: Jul 5, 2005, 12:04:58 PM
I guess the person the poem is about must be very sad and lonely...
Pitty, I can't get to view the pic You were inspired by... My searcher doesn't listen to me... as always... :heart:

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~sjon:iconsjon: Jul 5, 2005, 2:11:38 PM
Thanks.
Hmm, I can't find it either. I suppose the changing of cathegories that DA went trough some time ago broke a couple of links.

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