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Roaring whisper by ~sjon:iconsjon:

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Time will tell.

But time is mute.
It passes by silently
slowly moving like a mighty river
unstoppable.

Time will tell.

Yet time flies by
soundlessly rushing
hurrying along trying to catch itself
unrelenting.

Time will tell.

Deafeningly silent
it accelerates and slows
staying close and out of reach
unwaiting.

Time will tell.

It's roaring unheard
like an army marching by
stomping footsteps on the clouds
uncatchable.

Time will tell.

but we won't hear.
©2006-2008 ~sjon
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More than a year has past.
But I still live.
Strange thing is that work is killing me, I am doing an average of about 12hours a say, six sometimes seven days a week. So I am exhausted. And yet inspiration rears it head again.
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~RanTanTan:iconRanTanTan: Oct 6, 2006, 8:05:27 AM
awesome..really made.. well.. think I pressume, or at least spechless. keep on doing things like this regardless how hard work will be, the effort is worth your work..or other way round ^^

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"Das Schönste, was wir erleben können, ist das Geheimnisvolle." ("The most beautiful, which we can experience, is the mysterious.")

A.Einstein
~sjon:iconsjon: Oct 6, 2006, 2:00:45 PM
thanks.

It's not high art but it's a good mood-setter to get my rusty poetic bones back in action. ^_~

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I am not bald! ... Just well streamlined ^_^
~RanTanTan:iconRanTanTan: Oct 6, 2006, 3:44:15 PM
for a poetic-disaster like I am this sounds better than everything I could imagine (and many I know from others), so you earned my whole admiration. keep up the good work ;p

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"Das Schönste, was wir erleben können, ist das Geheimnisvolle." ("The most beautiful, which we can experience, is the mysterious.")

A.Einstein
~torriedragons:icontorriedragons: Jun 16, 2008, 11:35:27 AM
I love your comparison of time to a river. its a beautiful comparison and a beautiful poem :)

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Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons... for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup.
~sjon:iconsjon: Jun 21, 2008, 6:53:26 AM
Yes, it tends to pick you up and sweep you away ;)

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I am not bald! ... Just well streamlined ^_^
~torriedragons:icontorriedragons: Jun 23, 2008, 4:27:47 PM
yes it does :D
oh and!
i was writing some of my new book that i just started writing the other night, and i thought back to this poem and i used a comparison of a roaring river for someone remembering something ^^

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Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons... for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup.
~sjon:iconsjon: Jun 24, 2008, 2:12:14 PM
:love:
That's why I write. Hoping to inspire people.

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I am not bald! ... Just well streamlined ^_^
~torriedragons:icontorriedragons: Jun 25, 2008, 10:03:27 AM
^^ and inspire me you did!

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Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons... for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup.
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