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©2005-2008 ~sjon
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heart of ice

feelings lost
thrown aside
discarded on the road
leading nowhere

feelings lost
leaving darkness
fuzzy edges moving by
destiny undefined

feelings lost
pushed away
dumped on the track
trodden down

feelings lost
doubt remaining
will they come back
forever tempting

feelings lost.
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~shaded-cameo:iconshaded-cameo: Sep 4, 2005, 10:23:11 AM
I like the way of repeating the line 'feeling lost'
it makes you think...

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' you don't need to find answers
for questions never asked of you '
~RanTanTan:iconRanTanTan: Sep 12, 2006, 9:46:40 AM
well said..*sigh*

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"Das Schönste, was wir erleben können, ist das Geheimnisvolle." ("The most beautiful, which we can experience, is the mysterious.")

A.Einstein
~sjon:iconsjon: Sep 12, 2006, 1:14:10 PM
Thank you.
It's been a while but it still sounds fresh.

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I am not bald! ... Just well streamlined ^_^
~RanTanTan:iconRanTanTan: Oct 6, 2006, 3:42:26 PM
my pleasure ;p

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"Das Schönste, was wir erleben können, ist das Geheimnisvolle." ("The most beautiful, which we can experience, is the mysterious.")

A.Einstein