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rhyme time-out shout by ~sjon:iconsjon:



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It will never dry up that well
even with the sun shining fell
Ever when the water runs low
there is some subterranean flow
drip-feeding the reservoir of water
keeping the level above care and bother

So I don't worry myself senseless
even when I write words rhyme less
Because I remember that down below
the verses linger, waiting to grow
forming beautiful themes all fresh,
painting with words rippling like flesh.  

But for the moment I am dry
however hard I try
no wonderful words come tumbling
out of my hands now fumbling
searching for combinations unspoken
but finding all verses are broken.
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©2007-2008 ~sjon
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Just trying to catch some rhyming mood, It's been gone to long.
Oh, I still stumble on the odd rhyming phrase, but stringing them together kind of stems the flow.
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~herbatta:iconherbatta: Jun 24, 2007, 2:18:47 PM
that's pretty damn cool. soft, easy and nice. good job(;

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shit happens.
~sjon:iconsjon: Jul 1, 2007, 2:24:52 PM
Thanks (late but well meanth)

I have an acute lack of time
to play with words and rhyme
I come up with single verses all bright
but they don't connect with others all right.

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I am not bald! ... Just well streamlined ^_^
~herbatta:iconherbatta: Jul 1, 2007, 5:06:07 PM
oh, you're rhyming... again... that's nice of you(;

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~sjon:iconsjon: Jul 3, 2007, 2:30:50 PM
I really can't help it
When the words hit
The verses flow
so there I go

A coment I cannot leave
without extra words to weave
It's in my nature to rhyme,
I do it all the damned time.

;)

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I am not bald! ... Just well streamlined ^_^